tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6289070225985289907.post9214641339836894548..comments2024-03-28T02:15:55.750-04:00Comments on Write Me: M is for MermaidKaye Draperhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09134006398950107252noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6289070225985289907.post-38063996735894213082012-04-27T09:09:37.165-04:002012-04-27T09:09:37.165-04:00Thanks Dave :) I love your profile picture, by the...Thanks Dave :) I love your profile picture, by the way!Kaye Draperhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09134006398950107252noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6289070225985289907.post-29334266632487809622012-04-25T15:11:47.048-04:002012-04-25T15:11:47.048-04:00You did something right. I looked to see if there ...You did something right. I looked to see if there was anything more to the post. :)David M. Cramptonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06625473174544851291noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6289070225985289907.post-8211822653430328532012-04-25T15:11:30.346-04:002012-04-25T15:11:30.346-04:00You did something right. I looked to see if there ...You did something right. I looked to see if there was anything more to the post. :)David M. Cramptonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06625473174544851291noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6289070225985289907.post-12511856157811783322012-04-15T19:32:20.977-04:002012-04-15T19:32:20.977-04:00Thanks. That was purposeful. I was trying to con...Thanks. That was purposeful. I was trying to convey that although he started out thinking of her as a monster, he couldn't help beginning to think of her as a person- he couldn't decide on "it" or "She".Kaye Draperhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09134006398950107252noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6289070225985289907.post-50380942932909153112012-04-15T14:43:17.736-04:002012-04-15T14:43:17.736-04:00Lovely story beautifully told - a bit mixed up on ...Lovely story beautifully told - a bit mixed up on the pronouns periodically (she, it)<br /><br />"The creature in the net looked up at him with big, luminous eyes. Its dark hair was wet and stringy, and it was plastered to her face and torso like seaweed"<br /><br />Lovely blog.<br /><br />Here from the A-Z<br />XO<br />WWWWisewebwomanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15281689872840844191noreply@blogger.com